A silly Atlantis Easter haiku

[gategrrl]

Ponytail flicks
tip toes around the lab
Hen fruit McKay left

"Technicolor hen fruit!"
McKay loves Bugs Bunny
Kav, John, him hunting

Hey - I didn't say they'd be *good*, now did I?

Comments

[betacandy.livejournal.com]

If you read them while slightly tipsy, it feels like there's hidden meaning. Seriously. ;)

[gategrrl.livejournal.com]

Wow, can I have some of what you're drinking?
;-)

That's the thing. With haiku, you can only insinuate. So there really is some subtext there I couldn't make into text. If I were better at haiku, it would be much clearer using high falutin' metaphors, etc. Gee. I wonder what sort of eggs John, Kavanagh and McKay are *looking* for? ::whistles innocently::

[betacandy.livejournal.com]

It was some cheap Australian white wine or another, but you're welcome to a cup. ;)

I think you got the same subtext I was getting, anyway. ;)