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Nov. 28th, 2005 11:08 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
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Got to go to Starbucks this morning - tomorrow morning is the last Parenting class required by the Gov't for participation in the school's preK program. Added a whole bunch of words, over a thousand. I'll do some some work later on, but man, this thing is going to need mucho revisions. In earlier parts of the story, I brought up these plot threads, and then forgot about them, or rushed past them, or something...so yes, I'm going to be doing some drastic and thorough revisions. I have no idea how much of this is going to end up staying in the finished narrative. There's a lot of telling, not showing. wah!
The cohesiveness of the story also heavily depends on how much sleep (uninterrupted) I achieve the night before, and of course Little Guy had to wake up at 4:30 and tell me he wants to cuddle. I was on Mermaid's bed - she was very anxious the night before about me staying with her when she went to sleep, and I'm wondering what she's stressing over, and when she'll be able to tell me.
